Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Sometimes on a Mountain in September

 Kate Messner has a poem titled "Sometimes on a Mountain in April" that I really like. Since I just spent some time in the mountains over the weekend, I thought I would use her poem as a jumping off point for one of my own.

Sometimes, on a mountain in September,
gold barely shows itself,
hiding its treasure.
Reds, deep and rich,
velvet the hills,
vying with deep greens
for attention.

















Sometimes on a mountain in September,
the sounds of the town in the valley
are drowned by the still-rushing river,
bounding over rocks,
nourishing mother and fawn
hidden beneath the reds and greens.
Crickets, startled by our presence,
chirrup loud exclamation points
as they fly past.
















Sometimes on a mountain in September,
the sky is the bluest you can remember.
The beauty almost hurts your eyes--
so unused they are to seeing.
It definitely dents your heart.
And the road that led you to this spot
winds away like a promise:
peace.


Sometimes, on a mountain in September,
worries and stress get buried
under reds and greens
and rushing rivers
and crickets
and sky.
Left
Sometimes on a mountain in September.

5 comments:

  1. This is beautiful. And the accompanying pictures are breathtaking. I particularly like the last stanza and the peace that it brings. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Oh this is amazing. I actually spent time up in the mountains this weekend as well and for a second thought you had somehow posted my pictures up on your blog. What a perfect description of what it is like being up there right now. :)

    (English 423)

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  3. The words are lovely, and great that you added your photos to go with them.

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  4. So fitting for this weeks experiences. Thank you for writing this and sharing!

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  5. Hi, Debbie! I just found this post when I was looking for my original poem (yes, I know that your hard drive is a hot mess when you end up googling yourself to find your own poetry...but trust me, it's easier this way.) Anyway...I was delighted that my poem was a mentor text for your beautiful September poem. Would you mind if I showed a quick screen shot of your blog post and shared an excerpt of this at a writing conference where I'm presenting next week?

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