Nice description! Storms rolling in are fascinating to watch.
You are so right about the smell of a storm - water and dirt.
A spring storm, no less. I think I smelled a hint of pollen in there. We are so close!
I really did love how everyone wrote about it. It made me far too antsy for the warm storms of summer.
Awesome sensory description. I'm always looking for some great mentor texts to share with my kids. I'm saving this one. You ending surprised me. MaryHelen